SHAUNANNA CHEATING WITH GENESIS (ENSHATE BOYFRIEND)
EXT- BUS STOP-night
ENSHANTE sits at the bus stop. SHAUNANAA sits with ENSHANTE at the bus stop uncomfortable by moving about on the seat and try not to look at ENSHANTE in the eye. ENSHANTE realises that SHAUNANAA is acting weird.
ENSHANTE
What is the matter, babes?
SHAUNANAA
Nothing, ENSHANTE
ENSHANTE doesn’t believe her
ENSHANTE
(angry)what the matter SHAUNANAA
SHANANAA JUMPS AND STARTS TO CRY
SHANANAA
(STUMBLING) PROMISE- YOU- WONT- GET- ANGRY
ENSHANTE
Aint promising nothing, you know me by now if i get angry, i get angry. Just tell, man, cha
SHAUNANAA
(CRYING AND QUEITLY) i slept with genesis and he told me he loved me
ENSHANTE GOES RED AND PUCHES SHAUNANAA AND SHAUNANAA CRYS EVEN WORST THAT EVERYONE AT THE BUS STOP STARTS TO LOOK
ENSHANTE
(SCREAMING)when did start SHAUNANAA
SHAUNANAA
six months and tomorrow will be are seven month anniversry
ENSHANTE
you have the aldasetiy to say that tomorrow is your seven month anniversry and i was going you later but now after this i will tell you now ... me and genesis are getting married so how can i believe what you say
SHAUNANAA
Liar you are not getting married because we are having a baby together and he says he just with you because he have to man
ENSHANTE
Skeen stop chatting you sket you just want man and you will do anything to get one so please allow yourself batty girl
GENESIS calls SHAUNANAA
GENESIS
Hey babes, i want to tell you it is over between us because i am in love with ENSHANTE and SHAUNANAA you were just beat and delete, sorry but you are just a sket going out with your bestfriends man you should be ashamed of yourself and remember don’t tell ENSHANT-
SHAUNANAA
She already knows...(crying) how can you do this to me and you told me you loved me and cared for me and... i gave you every thing... GENESIS i have something to tell you something
GENESIS
WHAT?
SHAUNANNA
(CRYING AND BREATHING HARD) I AM PREGANT
Media
ReplyDeleteOre, great work.
You have used the correct formatting. You have used the right indents to show the difference between the action and the dialogue. All character names have been written in capitals and there are directions for the characters in brackets.
Your slug lines are correct - showing where and when the action occurs.
You should make sure you use correct punctuation and capital letters in your script. It is a formal document that you would share with other people.
Also make sure that you write enough ACTION in your script so that it is obvious what we are seeing as well as what the characters are saying.
MERIT
Mr Monahan