Act 1, Scene 1:
EXT.PLAYGROUND/PARK.MORNING
Fade in
‘THE RUDE GIRLS’ consists of VIXEN, who is the leader of the
group, VASSY, who actually dumb and is called VASSY because she likes Vaseline,
VIOLIN, who is the smart one which cusses people with it. They all dress in
short fitted navy blue pencil skirt, white t-shirt with the top three buttons
open so you can see their chest while their tie just sits on it and they are
all wearing Nike blazer trainers. they all have a bottle of boost in their
hands which actually contains orange juice. VIXEN is fixing herself up, while
VASSY and VIOLIN are arguing over the best Vaseline. The show production sees
the girls and runs up to them.
VASSY
(shouting) How can you say der
plain one is betta than the coco butta Vaseline?
VIOLIN
(rolled her eyes then sighs)No I
did not say coco butter; I said the flavoured one is better than the plain one,
you know there is more than one flavour Vaselin?
VASSY
(puts her head down then looks up
like she nothing happened)yeah I did noe dat dough so shut up
While that’s happening the VIXEN talks to the SHOW PRODUCTION
about herself and what the gang is about
SHOW
PRODUCTION
So what’s your
name?
VIXEN
(has a deep
voice)hiya, whats your name?
SHOW
PRODUCTION
(looks confused) well, I asked you
first, so can you tell me your name.
VIXEN
(with an attitude) well I asked you
second, so what is your name?
SHOW
PRODUCTION
(getting frustrated) darling can
you just tell me your name so we can put it on tv?
VIXEN
(BEING CHEEKY) well did your
parents tell you never to speak to strangers?
SHOW
PRODUCTION
Yes they –
VIXEN
SO WHY ARE YOU MANDEMS TALKING TO
ME FOR?!
SHOW
PRODUCTION
Because we are doing a documentary
on Bermondsey and we want to follow you
VIXEN
Iyte, why didn’t you say that in
the first place
Violin came over while she heard the conversation
SHOW
PRODUCTION
We did but
darling you must of not heard it
VIOLIN
But darling you did not say that, you said tv not a documentary
SHOW
PRODUCTION
And you must be?
VIOLIN
And you must be?
SHOW
PRODUCTION
Not you two?
VIXEN and VIOLIN laughs a lot
VASSY screams and the camera moves to her
VASSY
I broke my mirror I am gonna get
21years of good luck
VIOLIN(LAUGHING)
No darling
it is 7 YEARS OF BAD LUCK, LOL
SHOW
PRODUCTION
YOU MUST
BE?
VASSY
MY NAME IS VASSY
SHOW
PRODUCTION
FINALLY SOME SAY
IT AT THE FIRST TIME
VIXEN and VIOLIN roll their eyes
FADES OUT
Good work, you have included appropriate conventions for teh genre (interview ideas) and structured your script using the majority of the formating rules.
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Target - when adding extra detail about the characters in brackets, it needs to go next to their name, not before the dialogue.
yes i understand and i will put it in my next script.
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