Wednesday, 24 October 2012

script


Act 1, Scene 1:

EXT.PLAYGROUND/PARK.MORNING

Fade in

‘THE RUDE GIRLS’ consists of VIXEN, who is the leader of the group, VASSY, who actually dumb and is called VASSY because she likes Vaseline, VIOLIN, who is the smart one which cusses people with it. They all dress in short fitted navy blue pencil skirt, white t-shirt with the top three buttons open so you can see their chest while their tie just sits on it and they are all wearing Nike blazer trainers. they all have a bottle of boost in their hands which actually contains orange juice. VIXEN is fixing herself up, while VASSY and VIOLIN are arguing over the best Vaseline. The show production sees the girls and runs up to them.

 

                        VASSY

(shouting) How can you say der plain one is betta than the coco butta Vaseline?

              VIOLIN

(rolled her eyes then sighs)No I did not say coco butter; I said the flavoured one is better than the plain one, you know there is more than one flavour Vaselin?

              VASSY

(puts her head down then looks up like she nothing happened)yeah I did noe dat dough so shut up

While that’s happening the VIXEN talks to the SHOW PRODUCTION about herself and what the gang is about

                        SHOW PRODUCTION

          So what’s your name?

                        VIXEN

          (has a deep voice)hiya, whats your name?

                        SHOW PRODUCTION

(looks confused) well, I asked you first, so can you tell me your name.

                        VIXEN

(with an attitude) well I asked you second, so what is your name?

              SHOW PRODUCTION

(getting frustrated) darling can you just tell me your name so we can put it on tv?

                        VIXEN

(BEING CHEEKY) well did your parents tell you never to speak to strangers?

              SHOW PRODUCTION

Yes they –

              VIXEN

SO WHY ARE YOU MANDEMS TALKING TO ME FOR?!

              SHOW PRODUCTION

Because we are doing a documentary on Bermondsey and we want to follow you

              VIXEN

Iyte, why didn’t you say that in the first place

 

Violin came over while she heard the conversation

                        SHOW PRODUCTION

          We did but darling you must of not heard it

                        VIOLIN

But darling you did not say that, you said tv not a documentary

              SHOW PRODUCTION

And you must be?

              VIOLIN

And you must be?

              SHOW PRODUCTION

Not you two?

VIXEN and VIOLIN laughs a lot

VASSY screams and the camera moves to her

                        VASSY

I broke my mirror I am gonna get 21years of good luck

              VIOLIN(LAUGHING)

No darling it is 7 YEARS OF BAD LUCK, LOL

              SHOW PRODUCTION

YOU MUST BE?

                        VASSY

          MY NAME IS VASSY

                        SHOW PRODUCTION

          FINALLY SOME SAY IT AT THE FIRST TIME

VIXEN and VIOLIN roll their eyes

FADES OUT

 

 

 

 

 

 

2 comments:

  1. Good work, you have included appropriate conventions for teh genre (interview ideas) and structured your script using the majority of the formating rules.
    M-

    Target - when adding extra detail about the characters in brackets, it needs to go next to their name, not before the dialogue.

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    1. yes i understand and i will put it in my next script.

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