Good work, you have identified the technique used in the advert and described the target audience. You have used evidence to support your ideas and started to explain key ideas.
Target - make sure each idea in explained and justified. You have written that women will like the advert because they will be intrigued by the change in song. How will it intrigue them? Is there a better piece of evidence you could use - what about the slogan? What about the way men are presented? You have also said that the humour in the advert is created through exaggeration. Exaggeration of what? Why is it funny? M- From Miss Morris
Good work, you have identified the technique used in the advert and described the target audience. You have used evidence to support your ideas and started to explain key ideas.
ReplyDeleteTarget - make sure each idea in explained and justified.
You have written that women will like the advert because they will be intrigued by the change in song. How will it intrigue them? Is there a better piece of evidence you could use - what about the slogan? What about the way men are presented?
You have also said that the humour in the advert is created through exaggeration. Exaggeration of what? Why is it funny?
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From Miss Morris